I think that your values look good for the most part. Perhaps pay attention to how dark you have made those smoke stacks and the long side of the building. Speaking about the shapes, I would try to work small again, especially since the factory building is off. Specifically, I feel that it lacks the slight foreshortening which we see in the original on the corner on the one which is closest to us.
I think that your values look good for the most part. Perhaps pay attention to how dark you have made those smoke stacks and the long side of the building. Speaking about the shapes, I would try to work small again, especially since the factory building is off. Specifically, I feel that it lacks the slight foreshortening which we see in the original on the corner on the one which is closest to us.
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